A dreamy glassy place
So endlessly placid;
Yet made on confusion
And questions alike;
Fallen hopes bothered
Most completely mitten;
Likened infinitely on
Day and nightly home;
Couldn't understand
Any or all titanic;
Feelings were plenty
In mostly absurd dark;
Cities were towering
And alleys lived in;
Honored was heart on
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I like what I am reading on your blog. There's some good stuff here. The only advice I would give is the same I give my students all the time--try playing with your poetic style and themes to shake things up a bit.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to seeing what else you write!
I truly appreciate the compliment and thanks so much for the advice I'm truly grateful.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I hope to continue and hopefully I'll get better.
Most Gratefully
Grant Guda
The Wannabe Poet
I really love this one. I love how it makes me feel and the imagery and the chaos. Very cool
ReplyDeleteThanks so very much it means a lot!
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