Saturday, 27 February 2010

Random Mind

My Mind So Random!
On life
And love thought;
On book
And letter read;
On fate
And destiny looked!

My Mind So Random!
On beauty
And crush thought;
On action
And mission lost;
On star
And clouds lived!

My Mind So Random!
On sky
And rain traveled;
On snow
And dream hidden;
On universe
And infinity reasoned!


  1. hey there! foolow your blog already! thank you for inviting. :)

  2. Do you capitalize each line beginning intentionally? That's a question I always ask my students because so many of them use Word which often automatically capitalizes upon return.

    Personally, I dig the thoughtful employment of mechanics in poetry; it guides me as a reader by illuminating meaning logically.

    I am digging the syntax of this poem!

  3. I do capitalize on purpose. It seems like that's what they do in all the poetry books I've read in the past I just thought that's what you were supposed to do in poetry.

    I do agree poetry is a wonderful thing. It can be used to explain so many things in a way not expressed in rigid writing.

    I truly appreciate it! I'm always grateful when people are so kind!

    Most Gratefully
    Grant Guda,
    The Wannabe Poet

  4. Cikdeline you are most welcome and I am very grateful that you are now following my blog!