HEYA I meant to drop by and check out your poems since a while ago but never got around to it. but here I am. Anyway, this is interesting. I do think that you could insert a bridge before going into the line on love there - the flow seems a bit jumpy to me. Hope this is helpful ;)
HEYA I meant to drop by and check out your poems since a while ago but never got around to it. but here I am. Anyway, this is interesting. I do think that you could insert a bridge before going into the line on love there - the flow seems a bit jumpy to me. Hope this is helpful ;)
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