Friday, 5 March 2010

Joys of Life

Fantastic feelings felt
On summer day so long;
Emotions so wonderful
In endless adventure;
Titanically placed hugs
Most completely received;
Infinitely hindered hate
Made every single day;
In that day so beautiful
on mind and memory alike;
Bountiful laughs were
Exclaimed joyfully from
Childish lips randomly;
Life was amazing in those
Times of unhindered love,
Golden from kindness and
Caring so salivating;
Life was a great domain!

4 comments:

  1. hello dear,
    Thank you ever so much for the wonderful comments on my blogs. This is truly beautiful!
    Your use of words are quite flowing and soft.
    if i could wrap myself up in this i would!

    "Titanically placed hugs
    Most completely received;"
    ^these lines, just perfect!^

    you asked for advice.
    well i don't really have any advice.
    i just simply let the words pour out of me and once they have wrote themselves, i reread and edit things, move them around, think of words that suit what mood i am going for... until it feels right. My inspiration comes from mostly what i feel, a memory, and also from the silence.
    Sorry i probably haven’t helped much.
    it would also be a pleasent joy for me to join your blogs. thank you.
    - R.

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  2. I've been enjoying your poetry, and will be dropping by from time to time.

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  3. Sometimes there is power in merely remembering. :)

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  4. Thanks for leaving a comment over on my dull little blog. I like your poems—good writings. You might want to submit some to The Storyteller Magazine. They publish a few poems here and there in their mag. There's a link to it in the link bank on my blog, if you're interested.

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