Fantastic feelings felt
On summer day so long;
Emotions so wonderful
In endless adventure;
Titanically placed hugs
Most completely received;
Infinitely hindered hate
Made every single day;
In that day so beautiful
on mind and memory alike;
Bountiful laughs were
Exclaimed joyfully from
Childish lips randomly;
Life was amazing in those
Times of unhindered love,
Golden from kindness and
Caring so salivating;
Life was a great domain!
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hello dear,
ReplyDeleteThank you ever so much for the wonderful comments on my blogs. This is truly beautiful!
Your use of words are quite flowing and soft.
if i could wrap myself up in this i would!
"Titanically placed hugs
Most completely received;"
^these lines, just perfect!^
you asked for advice.
well i don't really have any advice.
i just simply let the words pour out of me and once they have wrote themselves, i reread and edit things, move them around, think of words that suit what mood i am going for... until it feels right. My inspiration comes from mostly what i feel, a memory, and also from the silence.
Sorry i probably haven’t helped much.
it would also be a pleasent joy for me to join your blogs. thank you.
- R.
I've been enjoying your poetry, and will be dropping by from time to time.
ReplyDeleteSometimes there is power in merely remembering. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for leaving a comment over on my dull little blog. I like your poems—good writings. You might want to submit some to The Storyteller Magazine. They publish a few poems here and there in their mag. There's a link to it in the link bank on my blog, if you're interested.
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